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Okay, here's the plot.
"After a tragic rejection by his one and only love, Jonathan Press mourned for 3 days before commited suicide by hanging. In his judgement, Jonathan was given a choice: spend a year in hell or spend 200 years as one of Heaven's official death recorders. Rather than spending a year being tortured, Jonathan chose the messenger job and wound up having to follow an assigned person around for the last week of their life, and record anything and everything that said person did.
So, after 199 years, Jonathan was assigned to a poor working-class man of 35. It was then that Jonathan learned of a glitch in Heaven's ruling; if the person sees you, you can become human again for as long as that person remains alive. The man that he was assigned to just happened to be a medium, and saw Jonathan right away. Jonathan became human and immediately set out to do things that he failed to do 199 years before. But, while rejoicing, Jonathan was chased back to the man by hellhounds and warned that if he failed to do his job, even if alive, he would be sent to hell for the remainder of his sentance. Jonathan stuck close to the man, whose named was leared later to be Newman Close. After spending 5 days with Newman's family, Jonathan started to regret killing himself, seeing Newman's family have close to nothing and still be happy. More and more, Jonathan wished that Newman wouldn't have to die.
So, on Newman's death day, a train was scedualed to hit his car and kill him instantly. But, with all of his might, Jonathan pulled Newman out of the car and pushed him away at the last minute, only to be struck by the train and killed for his second time. Again defying the rules, Jonathan became human, but died before his assignment did.
He was sentenced to live out the rest of his punishment in hell, which was only for about 6 months. Though only there for a short time, 6 months in hell is like 60 years.
Though, after his punishment ended and he was sent to Heaven, where he found his old love and spent etternity trying to get her to love him back."
Yeah, I know...it sucks...just a quick shot, though.
"After a tragic rejection by his one and only love, Jonathan Press mourned for 3 days before commited suicide by hanging. In his judgement, Jonathan was given a choice: spend a year in hell or spend 200 years as one of Heaven's official death recorders. Rather than spending a year being tortured, Jonathan chose the messenger job and wound up having to follow an assigned person around for the last week of their life, and record anything and everything that said person did.
So, after 199 years, Jonathan was assigned to a poor working-class man of 35. It was then that Jonathan learned of a glitch in Heaven's ruling; if the person sees you, you can become human again for as long as that person remains alive. The man that he was assigned to just happened to be a medium, and saw Jonathan right away. Jonathan became human and immediately set out to do things that he failed to do 199 years before. But, while rejoicing, Jonathan was chased back to the man by hellhounds and warned that if he failed to do his job, even if alive, he would be sent to hell for the remainder of his sentance. Jonathan stuck close to the man, whose named was leared later to be Newman Close. After spending 5 days with Newman's family, Jonathan started to regret killing himself, seeing Newman's family have close to nothing and still be happy. More and more, Jonathan wished that Newman wouldn't have to die.
So, on Newman's death day, a train was scedualed to hit his car and kill him instantly. But, with all of his might, Jonathan pulled Newman out of the car and pushed him away at the last minute, only to be struck by the train and killed for his second time. Again defying the rules, Jonathan became human, but died before his assignment did.
He was sentenced to live out the rest of his punishment in hell, which was only for about 6 months. Though only there for a short time, 6 months in hell is like 60 years.
Though, after his punishment ended and he was sent to Heaven, where he found his old love and spent etternity trying to get her to love him back."
Yeah, I know...it sucks...just a quick shot, though.
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Amazing idea though